Welcome to my Portfolios page!
Revised by: 12156
Date: 2013.07.10
Date: 2013.07.10
This page has a lot of information of my blog. I wrote a lot of words in first semester. I can't add madia, audio, video information in 1st semester. So I want to add these information in 2nd semester. I wrote many comments, so I want to continue it in second semester. Please look at portfolios of essay and book review. I wrote many essays and book reviews in 1st semester. It was so difficult, I did them almost every day, but these are so interesting. I want to read books more in 2nd semester.
0.0. Proto-Portfolios
Reflections on Proto-Portfolios
I wrote many words in 1st semester, but I didn't write a blog when 1st semester started. Writing a blog is boring and not interesting, I think. However I started a blog from April. It was hard for me, but it is interesting for me. Finally, I wrote a lot of words on my blog.
1.0. 1st Semester Portfolio
This portfolio shows my essays of 1st semester.
1.1. Essay Showcase
Best Essay
Overall Essay Developments
I wrote many words through writing essays in 1st semester. When I wrote essay in the first time, I couldn't write enough. And I don't like to write essays. However I must write many essays in 1st semester, and then I got to like writing essay. I tried to write essay by third person's viewpoint. It is difficult for me, but it thought me a lot of important things. So I want to write more in 2nd semester.
1.2. Book Review Showcase
Best Book Review
I choose BR 1-10: The Town Mouse and the Country Mouse because I could write words more longer than other my book reviews, so I like this book review. I read this book many times, so I could write a lot of sentences and paragraphs. It was surprise for me, so I like this book review.
Overall Book Review Developments
When I started to write book review, I don't like writing book review. It is so boring, and not interesting for me. However I wrote many book reviews, I got to like writing book review. I think important that reading a book completely, and writing review along a story. So I want to write book review better than 1st semester when 2nd semester will start.
2.0. 2nd Semester Portfolio
In this year, I wrote many essays, book reviews and daily posts almost every day. I worked hard writing a blog post when summer vacation started, and it is better than 1st semester. I have to write 15,000 words in this semester, so I worked hard to write blog posts as soon as possible. Also I wrote many reviews, it was hard for me. However I wrote many words in each review, and it is good work in 2nd semester.
2.1. Essay Showcase
Best Essay
I choose Essay 2-03b: Good or Bad computers because I can write the essay better than other essays what I wrote in a 2nd term. In this essay, I have to write the essay by third person's view point. It was difficult for me, so I needed a lot of time to write the essay. I spent a lot of time in the essay, it was good for me. I thought about this essay's contents more, so I wrote the good essay. This essay's content is easy, and there are many informations in the essay, so it will help you to read the essay. Also I used a link in the essay. I introduced contents of the essay by the link, and I wrote the contents minutely. Maybe you can understand about the essay easily.
Overall Essay Developments
I wrote a lot of essay in 2nd semester, and I wrote these essays by third person's view point. It was difficult for me, because I should not use a word like “I, my, me, . . .”. I used such as the pattern in 1st semester. In the 1st semester, I can't use the pattern well, so I studied that by myself during summer vacation. In this semester, I can use the third person's view point better than last semester. I wrote a lot of paragraph while I used the third person's view point. It was good development for me. Also I can wrote contents of most of all essays minutely, so I wrote many words in each essay. It is better than last semester, so I think that it is my development.
2.2. Book Review Showcase
Best Book Review
I choose BR 2-11: Stories of Dragons because I can wrote a story of this book minutely. I wrote what I like the book, also why I like the book. The essay is simple and easy, so I think you can read easily. And the story divided some chapters, so I introduced some chapters a little. I wrote many paragraphs, and I can write good book review. Also I wrote about a chapter what I like. I have never write about a chapter before, but I wrote that to introduce about the book.
Overall Book Review Developments
I think book review is difficult, and I have to write 18 book reviews in 2nd term. However I can write a content better than 1st term. I wrote a content to divide some paragraphs and some chapters. It is hard for me, but I can write more information. Also I wrote about a story in 2nd term. I wrote about what based on the story. It is difficult to write, because it is about history. I researched them while I write the book review, and it is good point in 2nd term. Also I wrote a lot of paragraphs and words in 2nd semester, it is better than 1st semester. I think that they are good developments for me.
2.3. Additional Highlights and Reflections
I think that you write a blog every day is especially important. I have to write many blog posts and words through a year, it was hard work for almost students. However if you write a blog every day, you will finish a homework faster. I really think that is important, but I really enjoyed to write my blog. Please look at the Proto-Portfolios spreadsheet, you can see words what I wrote in a year. In 2nd term, I wrote many words better than 1st term. Also most of all item is better than 1st term. I really thought that enjoying to write a blog is important. Also you can learn about computers while you write a blog, I think so. I used many functions during I wrote a blog post, it was difficult, however it gave me knowledge of computers.
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