Friday, October 18, 2013

Essay 2-02a: I Love My Home

I would like to talk about my favorite place, it is my home. My home is a special place for me, because I have a lot of special time at my home every day. And there are my family members in my home every day. I love my family, and I love my home. We have a lot of special time at my home, so my home is special for me. I will introduce what I like of my home today.

I like my home very much, so I have a lot of time at my home every day. I usually spend a time with my family, so I was happy every day. We took many things at home every day. For example, sleeping, eating foods, taking a bath, playing, relaxing, studying and so on. We have a lot of things what I should do every day, so we aren't bored every day. We can spend a special time every day, every time. My home is very nice, it has a lot of good points for me. So I love my home very much. I will talk about them too.

First, there is my room in my home. It is not a room of only me, it is my and my daughter's room. This room is small room, I think so because there are many furniture in the room. “There are many furniture in the small room.  ” It is not good, I felt that the room is too tight for me. On the other hand, I can relaxing very well in my room. The room is tight for me, but it gives me relaxing. I like a messy room maybe.

Also my room has many favorite things, so I can relaxing very well every day. For example, favorite clothing, favorite TV, favorite bed, favorite closet, favorite ornaments and so on. I always spend a time with my favorite things, so I can relaxing very much. I and my daughter were relaxing very much every day. We often relaxing at a bed, the bed is main. There is my daughter's bed in our room, but she doesn't sleep in the bed. We always sleep at a bed together.

Second, there is a dining room in my home. It is a large room more than my room. In the room, my family members are relaxing every day. We have a good time at the room, it is important for us. We eat a meals, we have a long chat over dinner, we watch our favorite TV programs and so on. We always have a good time at the room while we do something special. In the room, there are a lot of furniture. I want to clean up the room, but I can't do it yet. However the room is very comfortable and gives me relaxing, so I like the room.

Third, there is a bathroom in my home. In the room, there are a lot of my favorite things. For example, my favorite shampoo and treatment, my favorite soap, my favorite body towel and so on. I like them, and I like a bathroom very much. I often take a bath for long time, it is about one hour every time. I usually take a bath slowly, the times are very precious for me. I like taking a bath because it gives me relaxing and refresh. I like cleaning a bathroom too. The room is my special room, I like the room very much.

[585 words]

8 comments:

  1. After reading your essay, I can know about your favorite place well.
    When you take a bath, do you take a bath with your daughter??
    Spending with your favorite goods is very important I think.
    For improving your essay, I recommend you to write conclusion in last paragraph.

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    1. Thank you for comment! I am glad to your reflections.
      I give you answer, I often take a bath with my daughter.
      Normally my father take a bath with her.
      I understand your suggestion, I will try to write it in next essay!

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  2. My family talk in the dinning after dinner and we relax there too.

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    1. Thank you for comments, I am glad to your reflection!
      Dinning room is important for my family!

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  3. I like my home too! I could know that your family and you get along well thanks to this essay. Your home is very good!

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    1. Thank you Nonoka, I am glad to your reflections!
      My essay is not good, I think. Do you have a question?

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  4. I think good you wrote many words. How many your family?

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    1. Thank you Kaya, I am happy for your comment.
      I give you answer, my family is four members.
      My father, my mother, my daughter and me.
      I love my family, how about you?

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